Maybe

Maybe

A Poem by MoonTig3r
"

maybe that is the question

"

Maybe I need a one night stand

Or a night to change your mind

Maybe I just need a few seconds

Then everything between us will be fine

 

Maybe I need a new person

Or stay with you forever

Maybe just be over it all

Or maybe it ends…never

 

Maybe is a strong word

But love is too

All I really know is

I maybe want to be with you

© 2011 MoonTig3r


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Great battlle of whether to stay or go. I have been there and it is not an easy place to be. Great job caputureing the inner tumoil one sometimes can go through.

Posted 13 Years Ago


throughout your whole poem "maybe" always starts of the lines its in. You should make the last one do the same. other than that this is a nice poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


maybe, maybe, maybe, a very strong thought on love, loss and feeling, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago



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MoonTig3r
MoonTig3r

Detroit, MI



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