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Just a quick one!

I crave attention like all the time,
Well sometimes
Only when I’m feeling myself and I feel fine
Though I’ve been walking on this curved line,
Finding my way back in time
To another life, meeting the strife
Of the night
Of all I could’ve been
All I dreamt to be
This road has certainly taken its toll on me.

Reviews

[D. Mansfield]

this is a great poem, tells a tale obout you and leaves me wanting to know more, just what an writer wants of an audience. Nice job

[John the Baptist]

Yes, life can take a toll on you. The only remedy is to regard it all as a lesson.

[willweb]

Another deep offering that allows the reader a glimpse into your world. Nicely done

[NelliKong]

This maybe a short poem, but it leaves a lasting impact. Really like the line" Ive been walking on this curved line finding my way back in time." Love your writing stye.