What happened to that girl?

About a girl

What happened to that girl? She used to be so happy, so care-free. Nothing could ever get her down. She liked herself, she was okay with her looks. But now it's like theres no point in trying. That girl, she used to be so confident. She knew what she wanted and how to get it. But now she has no clue. What happened to that girl, the one who had lots of friends, and love for herself.  That girl doesn't believe anymore, doesn't believe in anything, not love, happiness or faith. She's dropped out school, and has no soical life. That girl seems to always be sad and alone with only her computer to comfert her. She misses her life, her friends, she misses being someone. I miss that girl, the one who didn't care about the little things. Is that girl ever going to be happy again? Is she ever going to make new friend? She thought maybe it was just time that she needed, but so much time has past that she gave up. Gave up on trying to be happy, gave up on everthing...that girl is me. I miss me.

Author's Note

This is one of the first things I've ever writen so it might not be good..This is an amature writing.
So tell me what you think, is it good, bad, does it need improvement?
And keep in mind it's amature

Reviews

[raining]

It is good writing and you are young. It may seem like forever but eventually you will turn a corner and might find that you have changed though you hadnt noticed it yet. As for the actual words you chose to use... dont change a thing, but keep this voice, the voice of you, yourself. Many people who write never get to where you already are. They think they have to "add something" but really you, by keeping your own voice, are way ahead of them. I liked your sincerity, it shows great courage and self knowledge. bye, ...raining

[Martina]

Really is that you? I liked it but you'll find yourself again, Thank you for the comment, I sorry about that someone :(

[Kaden Sylvers]

check your spelling; add words that you can feel and smell and describe more....this does have potential but it does need work.