My Angel

Breathtaking Beauty 

Delicate, petite, fragile

Confidence, strength.

Elegantly striding 

through the mysterious 

pink and purple clouds.

Majestic white 

wings engulf her.

Smooth black curls 

whip behind her

luminescent face.  

Sparkling opals 

disappear behind 

eyelids that flutter.

Lips that glisten 

due to the rising sun.

Showering her with 

tantalizing shades 

of oranges and reds. 

One second, she

glances at me, 

then breaths deep

air filling her 

lungs and chest. 

Then she flies off.

Smooth and quiet. 

All I can do is 

stare, unmistakably 

watching as My 

Angel slowly 

shrinks, disappearing 

into the sun of gold.

Leaving me with the 

strength and confidence 

I had before lost. 

Reviews

[Careline]

Wow... Breathtaking.. I would love a guy to describe me as beautifully as this....

[TiffanyLynn]

Oh thank you, me too. I would be awestruck (: Thank you

[Andie]

This reminded me of Maximum Ride!
It was beautiful and flowing. Great job! :)

[TiffanyLynn]

Very much appreciated :)

[Andie]

:)