My Child

A quick snapshot of my hearts reflecting as I watched my children last summer

 

 

 

You make me proud.

You dance with joy,

And then rejoicing,

You sing your song,

While you journey.

Reviews

[James K. Blaylock]

Sweetly wondrous! Be blessed.

jkb

[Tiffany]

I know it is short. I was watching one of my children one day and she was laughing, a really deep beautiful laugh reflecting inner joy and peace. I penned this then and it stands...but no offense please, please, please! If you know me you know I love critical review. All comments and suggestions are welcome. But...lol...I have no intention of changing a word on this. I just wanted to share a bit of my heart. t.

[Tiffany]

erm, thats some interesting humer there mask...

[RYGON MASK]

and then you crash into a tree and mummy and baby dies :)

[Alicia™]

Lovely poem, but I really think you should make it longer!