Eternal

 

When I pondered, upon my bed

Things so grand, and thought as dead

Wondering, a mystery

Works of old, sweet history

God was said, sagacity’s stand

Immeasurable, like sand

Eternal, golden and grand.

 

Then I pondered, deep in thought

I looked for truth, so true I sought

The golden light, for me shone

Mortal plans, left all alone

Along the way, newer rife

Sought a bride, His spotless wife

Eternal, this golden life.

 

Again I pondered, thought true

To the end, for not a few

Could truth be, entwined in both

God tis same, just human growth

In His time, already shed

Tis a truth, truth to be read

Eternal, golden the head.

 

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

Excellent scribing thee hath wrought.. tight within the meter and your word play deeply
swoons to delight the senses.

[CassieLynne]

wow that's amazing! I could never write poetry like this! It's so deep and thought-provoking :) Well done!

[An owl on the moon]

Such profound wanderings and wonderings that bring alive the eternal aspects of life we so often ignore. Beautifully written and wonderfully inspired. So lifting!

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow, this is really a wondrous read! I enjoyed it greatly. God Bless

jkb

[A.M. Everlasting]

Simply amazing. I'm speechless here. And thank you, for the review earlier.