Sometimes

Expressing my needs...

Sometimes all I want

is an apology,

an acknowledgment

of my feelings.

 

Even when you don’t

agree,

sincerely

display the need

to make peace.

 

Sometimes all I want

is for you to listen

and not take a

defensive

position.

 

Sometimes I need to

know you’re willing

to validate

the tears that

are falling.

 

Sometimes I wish

it was easier

being your

lover.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This is sweet, depicting love from a willing and lovingly pleading lover's perspective.

It is packed with meaning and flows smoothly.

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, DEEP...I probably felt these emotions on both sides of the coin. I Loved how you bared your soul, yet it wasn't overdone...enough, to convey both, strength and weaknesses. Awesome write. Pen on.