My Rose

Just a short simple poem, haven;t been on in a while. :)

Your face so delicate,

Your hands so soft,

Your skin so pure,

Your heart so kind.

 

You make my heart whole,

For you’re my only rose. 

Reviews

[Mohamed Rahim Iqbal]

Wow it's dedicated one.
Good work. This is short and sweetness. All the best for the work
Thanks

[ChaoticSoul]

Very sweet and simple! And the image of the rose compared to the wholeness of the heart is beautiful. Nice writing!

[devon]

I feel as if the words are so delicate and simple, yet together, they make this wonderful, beautiful masterpiece. It's gorgeous in the simplest of ways.

:)