A Dream

I look outside and dream

about dancing in the snow,

to leave my problems behind

and laugh at loud!

 

My dreams are simple

not to worry about tomorrow.

Just to enjoy the moment

And dance happily.

 

But life isn’t that simple.

Every day it’s a new battle.

Sometimes you win,

sometimes you don’t.

 

And yet no matter how many sad moments

you live through,

those that are happy

carry much more weight.

 

So dream, smile and dance.

For you are alive and

therefore you have a reason

to smile.

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

You are as beautiful in poem as you are in letters. Taking away with you in that childhood innocence we all get to revisit when moods and hearts allow for it, is something quite awesome!! In the beginning of your poem, I am picturing you just smiling and laughing, throwing yourself to the mercy of the snow for a "snow angel", and just having a grand old time. I forget at times how the same thing over here in the states is the same over THERE, and even around the world. My thoughts on land that is foreign is always disguised with this idea that upon arrival there will be these long fields that stretch out as far as the imagination allows for, music to be heard, and a beautiful girl that would hopefully look as YOU do, Tiasshy... to meet us at our entrance to some new place of choice!! There are lines like the fourth one that should read "laughing OUT loud" and some sentences need a semi-colon instead of a comma or nothing at all. Beautiful, Tiasshy!! xoxox -Your Mark

[Tiasshy]

Yeah, grammar isn't my best even in my own language... :)
Thanks. Coming from you, this means a lot. This was actually written when I saw my little sisters just standing in the snow. They looked like little fairies. They are the reason I act like a child sometimes, since they are so much like myself.

Thanks Mark! :) Just for being you.

[Nithin Purple]

nicey drawn..this poem is the thing of beauty