Angel for you

Another love poem

 

I wish I were your angel

To cry at night your tears,

Always to stand beside you,

To hold your pain and fears.

 

I wish I were your angel

To keep alive your hope and trust,

To sleep inside your body,

To refrain your evil greedy lust.

 

I wish I were your shadow

To lay under your steps,

To make your path seem smoother,

To fall in your stead in the traps.

 

I wish I were your angel

To stop you from turning blind,

To try not letting you turn wicked,

To wake up your frisky inner child.

 

I wish I were your angel

To fly up to the stars,

To grab a star from up there,

With its ray to heal your scars.

 

I wish I were your inner child

To hide beneath your skin,

To make you pure and frail and naughty,

To show you how to be keen.

 

I wish I were your angel

To brighten up the path that’s right,

To walk beside you in the way,

To clear up your tired sight.

 

I wish I were your angel

To show up in your dreams,

To wipe away your bitter tears,

To answer to your desperate screams.

 

I wish I were a hungry wolf

To howl inside your heart,

To turn you free, listless and wild,

To teach you the hunting’s art.

 

I wish I were your angel

To love each second of your days,

To fight away your dreadful nightmares,

To be your over-army in the frays.

 

I wish I were the woman

Who sleeps with you tonight.

I wish I were your Bright side.

Oh, I just wish you were mine.

 

 

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

I wish I were your inner child
To hide beneath your skin,
To make you pure and frail and naughty,
To show you how to be keen.

This was stunning, the rhythm making it a delight to read. There were one or two awkward lines when I read it outloud, but it was a beautiful piece, full of yearning and it made me smile. Thanks.

Love,
Stephanie

[TamerQtaish]

Beautiful, and your ABAB structure in most of the poem backed it up nicely
I solute you for a piece well done

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[Catrinka]

This is a very beautiful write - great job! Very nicely done!

[*** Hey Jude***]

This reachs deep inside and touches the heart of all who desire to share "Agape" love with that special one! Very nice ~ Jude

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Cool poem. I like the semi-random repetition. You seem to get the angel thing. :)

Peace and love,
Gabe

[Rain]

Too many great lines to point to. Sometimes I think you could write for Nora Jones. There's a unique smoothness to your writings. Rain..

[Brenda Sue]

I love the style and flow. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Travis Ralston aka LIAR]

Absolutely great poem here. The style and way it was written compliments the real emotion built within. I enjoyed this very much.

-Trav

[PureSyn]

Wishes that emanates from ones heart always seeks to protect and love. This is beautiful
Well done!

Nicole

[Sparrow]

There's a lot of wishing going around in this poem but they're wishes from the heart and selfishly selfless, a good sign. Great write.