Angel for you

Another love poem

 

I wish I were your angel

To cry at night your tears,

Always to stand beside you,

To hold your pain and fears.

 

I wish I were your angel

To keep alive your hope and trust,

To sleep inside your body,

To refrain your evil greedy lust.

 

I wish I were your shadow

To lay under your steps,

To make your path seem smoother,

To fall in your stead in the traps.

 

I wish I were your angel

To stop you from turning blind,

To try not letting you turn wicked,

To wake up your frisky inner child.

 

I wish I were your angel

To fly up to the stars,

To grab a star from up there,

With its ray to heal your scars.

 

I wish I were your inner child

To hide beneath your skin,

To make you pure and frail and naughty,

To show you how to be keen.

 

I wish I were your angel

To brighten up the path that’s right,

To walk beside you in the way,

To clear up your tired sight.

 

I wish I were your angel

To show up in your dreams,

To wipe away your bitter tears,

To answer to your desperate screams.

 

I wish I were a hungry wolf

To howl inside your heart,

To turn you free, listless and wild,

To teach you the hunting’s art.

 

I wish I were your angel

To love each second of your days,

To fight away your dreadful nightmares,

To be your over-army in the frays.

 

I wish I were the woman

Who sleeps with you tonight.

I wish I were your Bright side.

Oh, I just wish you were mine.

 

 

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

I wish I were your inner child
To hide beneath your skin,
To make you pure and frail and naughty,
To show you how to be keen.

This was stunning, the rhythm making it a delight to read. There were one or two awkward lines when I read it outloud, but it was a beautiful piece, full of yearning and it made me smile. Thanks.

Love,
Stephanie

[Voice]

Very beautiful and I love the way it flows, amazing write�

Voice

[Carrie Montgomery]

I like the switch from softness to wildness here:
"I wish I were your angel

To cry at night your tears...I wish I were a hungry wolf

To howl inside your heart,

To turn you free, listless and wild"- just like love .
this is an excellent show of talent.

[Tania Leigh]

It's tough to find a favourite stanza here...they stand well on their own, and together make up an incredibly sweet poem of wistfulness. Very nice work!

[Robert Luna]

This was written with such a powerful involvement of emotions. As the words flowed into my head and straight to my heart. We all wish for things or to be other people and wish for better from life. I really enjoyed this and love the way you wrote this.


Great JOb!!!!!!

[THERISA]

Amazing poem. Did you write this poem first in Romanian and than translated it? If so, you deserve a huge hug for that. No matter what language you write in, the depth of your love is beyond measure. Hope you are able to share this poem with a very special person in your life. Thank you for sharing this passionate poem with us.

Therisa

[Poeticpiers]

A beautiful piece of writing well constructed and with such a clear message running through it I have no doubt you will find someone who needs a guardian angel such as you

[None]

Love and caringness prevail here and I believe the depth is shown with your words..."I wish I were your shadow To lay under your steps, To make your path seem smoother, To fall in your stead in the traps." All your verses show such feelings. Your last verse shows the pain of loving someone who belongs to another. You end it on a cheery note by starting over with "Bright Side." This is brilliant and so beautiful!

[Kenneth Hunt]

This is a great write, such emotion put into this poem. Kudos

[Mz. Rosilyn Vanessa]

That was very beautiful. I couldn't of said it better myself. I would like to encourage you to write another beautiful piece like this because it is so pure and a breathe of fresh air. Hats of to you.

[Ahmad Alhour]

Lovely...
A true explanation of deep emotions...
I like it...

Good job..
Keep it up...