One dream...one reality

 

 

 

 

 

My eyes are now two little holes,

 

 

 

 

I'm all darkness, light is gone.

 

 

 

 

Big temptations I now see,

 

 

 

 

I don't know deceptions they'll be.

 

 

 

 

 

God and faith, they are forgotten

 

 

 

 

I believe in Satan – my Darkened Master

 

 

 

 

For he promised to give me all

 

 

 

 

If I jump into his fiery hole.

 

 

 

 

 

Satan come into my dreams

And laughing, he told me this:

 

 

 

 

"Do not go looking for me,

 

 

 

For you'll find out there's no need

 

 

 

Cause I shall find you by myself

 

 

 

There's no place to hide from Hell

 

 

 

For your soul, my dear disciple,

 

 

 

Your enemies I'll hurt and humble

 

 

 

Guilty temptations in their eyes

 

 

 

I will put to make them fight

 

 

 

For so I'll steal their energy

 

 

 

And make them lie in misery.

 

 

 

With my cunning I allure

 

 

 

The fallen I make endure

 

 

 

Their desires price is high

 

 

 

Don't you see? I always lie!!

 

 

 

Cause temptations are a mask

 

 

 

Fire and torture are the rest

 

 

 

But you, people, are too proud

 

 

 

For a breath Heaven you want.

 

 

 

Usually you're so ignorant

 

 

 

You forget the most important

 

 

 

Mephisto is my real name

 

 

 

You give your soul, I give you Hell.

 

 

 

You always live in fantasy

 

 

 

And blindly follow my blind alley

 

 

 

Real sinners - that's what I love

 

 

 

There's no escape – not even from the one above

 

 

 

 

To give my words credibility –

 

 

 

This ain't a dream; it's reality

 

 

 

Girl, you too thought I could be kind

But now, my dear, your soul is mine."

Reviews

[Carrie Montgomery]

"Don't you see? I always lie!!" he ain't called the King of Lies for nothin'! ;-)
this is excellent. a great "story"

[Midnight Shadow]

Very interesting. Dark and deep. Stirring piece, stirring indeed.

[Poeticpiers]

So easy to fall for false promises but the price is always too high

[Bleeding Ink]

I really liked it. You might want to add "to" to "For he promised ^ give me all." Bravo, a good work.

[None]

Promises and that old nasty hook that makes one take the bait! I like the conversation here--how it goes from black to dark red and gets bigger. A great emphasis on the words to remind all who enter the dark chambers. Your words... "Cause temptations are a mask Fire and torture are the rest" ...these are among your incredible and haunting poem here.

[Rain]

WOW..
This one caught me off guard, as I suppose the devil does. Very thought provoking, and show casing your versatility. Rain..