Snow White

Snow White

A Poem by Tian
"

Not a once upon a time.

"

The tale we all know, 

starts with once upon a time.

Skin as white as snow,

Ebony hair, red lips.

Her stepmother, plotting her death,

and her, innocent as faeries in the forest.


But if the tale, doesn’t

start with once upon a time.

Skin a colour of deadly white,

Lips, colour of crimson blood,

Hair, black as ash.


She, gave her mother,

the shoes of death,

burn her feet, exhaust her.

And there she watch, with her newlywed,

her mother’s despair.


Have you heard?

She sent her mother to death.

No, but it couldn’t be her.

Not the innocent Snow white.

© 2018 Tian


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Tian


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Yes, that is the invitation of "Once upon a time." The suspension of reality to rest our minds. Really like this. Would not have thought of reversing the story to raise the question Thanks.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tian

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :)
i like the ironic twist of the fairy tale, nice piece of writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tian

6 Years Ago

thank you for the review ! :)
sette

6 Years Ago

it was a wonderful reading
A beautiful piece of art! Love how the poem melts into the reader's emotions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Tian

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! :)

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Added on April 12, 2018
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Tags: Snow-white, fairytale

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