First Sip, Last Drink

First Sip, Last Drink

A Poem by Dan_Thywill
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a short of 2am thoughts.

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You left me a hangover
That I've been curing for years
And got me pretending
I've been sober all those times

When in fact the very first
Dose of you got me very drunk.
I could never deny this,
"I've been thirsty since day one."

© 2015 Dan_Thywill


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Dan_Thywill
Hi, this won't take much of your time to read. Let me know what you think. Thank you!

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Good poem, Dan. I understand your words 100%. Your poem is short but, yet, it says it all. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dan_Thywill

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Karen. Your review means a lot. Yes, shorts like this are injected thoughts in my mind mo.. read more

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Added on April 14, 2015
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Dan_Thywill
Dan_Thywill

Santa Rosa, City, Laguna (region IV-A), Philippines



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