Influence

Influence

A Poem by Dan_Thywill
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Under the influence of liquid and air

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There are times
I get drunk from whiskey
Sometimes
I'm drunk in words
Drowned
In every space
Stuck
On every punctuation
I just don't get it,
I'm dead by thought
But alive in flesh
Sometimes
I wish it's
The other way around
Then the alarm
Went on.

© 2015 Dan_Thywill


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this is quite short but i like how short and concise each line is.
I really liked it tho! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dan_Thywill

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :')
lostnstars

9 Years Ago

you're welcome :)

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Added on March 28, 2015
Last Updated on March 28, 2015
Tags: Poetry, poem, death

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Dan_Thywill
Dan_Thywill

Santa Rosa, City, Laguna (region IV-A), Philippines



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