Pushing The Penvelope

 

You have written to me

Sonnets of love and lust

Words fly off the page

In a tumultuous rush

 

You speak of passion...

How you miss my scent

On the edge, holding the ledge

Thoughts now incoherent

 

My mind flashes back

To the first time we connected

Before limbs engulfed each other

No body part yet inspected

 

How your subtle stubble

Rubbed up against my ear

Whispering words of acceptance

Making sure the purpose was clear

 

Are you sure you want this..

Tongues probe where lips just digressed

Previously bent heads now look up

In semblance of being blessed

 

The echo of unvoiced words

Fill the cavity of my mouth

No need for shushing…

Movement stilled as you travel south

 

So when you write to me

Understand the visions you evoke

As usual, the master at his craft

Once again….pushing the Penvelope

 

Reviews

[Nautili]

Excellent work. Veyy sensual and unique in presentation. love it.

[Donni]

Penvelope! Love that! What a fun word. Very sensual and sexy. Thanks for sharing! Keep pushing the penvelope!

[Flow~]

There is a power and responsibility that comes with every pen. Words are powerful when used correctly. Your poem is outstanding, giving us a glimpse into how words can impact someone. It is like swept off ones feet as if they were in a romance novel. Great word use, and your flow is tight. I love this one~

[deeps]

So when you write to me
Understand the visions you evoke
As usual, the master at his craft
Once again�.pushing the Penvelope

I so loved these lines right here, this is amazing write here
Yes! this is a sensual piece here. I like this masterpiece you have created.

[ICE]

Wow! Such a sensual piece. This is well written and it flowed like a river. Simply amazing!

[Poeticpiers]

understated sensuality leaving much to the reader to interpret Well cone