The Devil May Cry

This is a Rondeau, written out of my crush on Dante, the sexiest devil hunter ever. *yum*

 

For Dante, my love, the demons won’t fall.

I fought for your life, yet over mine cast a pall.

The devil was naught, as we fought side by side.

But beware of my faults, not the least of which, pride.

Then I fell to my knees, took your pain, the wound fatal.

 

So the devil may cry, yet to you I still call.

And soft in my heart, a dark love song for all,

I turned up my head to sing before I died,

for Dante, my love.

 

My mind recalled struggle, what fury, what gall,

as we fought side by side in the devil’s own hall.

Then he struck me head on, I fell without guide.

“Don’t stop,” I called out, “keep going, don’t hide.”

Now I lay dying, by Heaven’s light held enthralled,

for Dante, my love.

Author's Note

I'm not sure of the rhythm. What do you think?

Reviews

[Flo_writer]

This is a tragedy I think, she died for someone she loved. I think the singing as
she died was a nice touch. The rhythm was okay but I was more intrested
in what was going on. It's a nice little tale.

P.S. A woman who knows about a videogame character, totally hot!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This was very good. Keep up the good work

[bluessadmood]

Lovely ,just wonderful,As We Fought The Demon, My Dante
Dante my love,Demons just wont fall,As I fight for your life,We fight side by side
Beware of my faults ,my pride,And I fall to my knees to take your pains,wounds fatal
The demon will cry as I still call,soft in my heart and sing dark love song for all
I turn my head to sing before I die,for Dante my love,i recalled the struggle the fury
We fought side by side in his hall,then he struck my head as I fell without a guide
Dont stop keep going never hide,now I am dying ,heavens light keeps me enthralled
For you Dante my love..
Oh what loveliness,such sweet thoughts and words,fighting the devil with my Dante
Lovely write..