In My Hands

So Why can't I die?

My jovial mask, tainted

Suicide sounds good.

 

 

My life, My choice right?

I concede. I know when to quit.

So ends my life's song.

 

 

 

 

    

                      

                         Douglas S.Williams

Author's Note

Originally created on 10/30/07. A compound haiku. After posting ths I realized that the second line in the second had eight syllables. I decided to keep it as is even though I messed up.

Reviews

[morbid]

aw very short and sad. but dont ever think of that, you are here for a reason. and its a good one at that or you would already have gone. people here love you i know that for sure. so i hope things get better. you know im here if you need to talk