For If You Died

Would you care,
Would you cry,
Could you bare,
If I died?

Could you go on,
Push further,
With me gone,
Moving forward.

Would you ask God,
Would you plead,
For my death painless,
My heavenly need.

For if you died,
So would I,
Tears of sorrow,
I've never cried.

No more smiles,
No more lies,
No more laughs,
No more ties.

I would not feel,
I would not hate,
I would not love,
I would not taste.

For if you died,
It'd be too late.

Reviews

[Odayin]

The whole poem as a whole is quite good with it's nice rhytm, meaning, and words. When i got to the end I was a little surprised to see it end so quicky. It seems like there was going to be more, but there wasnt. At first I didn't like it, I thought it was a mistake, but then a second later I understood, I got it. Death can come at any moment, it can just end it all in the blink of an eye. Sometimes you think there's going to be more, but there won't be. Nice relation, very well done

[Wild Willow Blue]

Again, such a powerful meaning behind your words here. I can really relate to this. It feels a bit dark to me, but I might be imagining that, too. I love it, all the same!