Silent Children

a creepy poem that will hopefully make you feel dark.

Hear the children of the town

Turn that frown upside down

watch the child wake from dead

see the eyes turn to red

as they walk with eerie silence

the minds of many turn to violence

the children walk with it abroad

they turn others and eat them raw

mother and father fear alike

when they see their child on the spike

still alive you see.. with moving hands

as their evil bodies plague the lands

but it's what they want, to be defeated

because that is what the dark lord needed

their guards are down for a while

until the devil makes them vile

Author's Note

his is one one of my first completed poems. Please state your opinion about it. I hope you enjoy I love writing creepy stuff like this.

Reviews

[Falcon1]

The arise of the wicked child of society Parents worry about this child of their's an evil influence over a child could be a life long problem with the law.

But a very good write for starters. Lighting the fire of creativity.

[TheLonelyKnight]

wow!!! really good!! is this is very first poem or one of the firsts?? i really liked that line "Turn that frown upside down
watch the child wake from dead
see the eyes turn to red
as they walk with eerie silence"

well i am a newbie too! look forward to ur other poems ^~^

[Throthgarde]

Thank you!!! this is my first real poem and I'm working on a new one at the moment.

[TheLonelyKnight]

Awesome! Be sure to publish it ;)