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A Poem by Threads
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Stop this noise inside
Maybe some cold will help me
Drop me into ice

© 2017 Threads


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The lines just blew me. The simple words you used are just perfect they give a very big impact to the readers and they just flow naturally with each other.
Beautiful piece. Keep up!

Posted 8 Years Ago
i am in love with the last line of this! what better way to describe the frantic desire to be numb and give up. drop ME into ice, thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Threads

8 Years Ago

A stab at a haiku, and apparently it hit its mark.
Thanks for the review
-Threads

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Keep pulling on that thread, maybe it will lead you to something you like, after all it got you this far. I am just someone looking to share and enjoy poetry. Feel free to tell me your thoughts more..

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