A glimpse of tomorrow

Moving to new opportunities

Don’t make me wait anymore 

I really do hate waiting

 

Watching paint dry isn’t fun

Counting sheep isn’t either

Hatching faint dreams isn’t easy

Writing ideas to one’s soul is the hardest

 

Waiting for summer snows

and this lover’s vows

Would seem to be

of same degree

 

Don’t make me guess anymore

I really do hate guessing

 

Give me a glimpse to tomorrow

A lapse from the current and its

Hurries

Worries

 

Guessing between refuse

and the finest muse

Would be to me

A desire undesirable

 

I would gladly watch the paints dry

to be rid of uncertainty

I would readily leave a candle to my soul for another

to hear those words

from your lips

Author's Note

A little something I patched up from notes that I made some weeks ago. Would appreciate any feedback, and I hope you like it!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Watching paint dry isn’t fun
Counting sheep isn’t either
Hatching faint dreams isn’t easy
Writing ideas to one’s soul is the hardest
I loved these lines. Overall a great theme to write upon. Waiting for someone....Well written.

[Threads]

I try my best, and hope that it resonates with people. :)

[Tasia]

it's great cause you sound anxious but hopeful : )

[Threads]

I try my best :P
Thanks for the feedback though. Do you happen to have any criticisms by chance?

[Tasia]

No, I think it's absolutely beautiful

[tekke]

I like it especially the line (Give me a glimpse to tomorrow A lapse from the current and its Hurries Worries). This really speaks me as someone in always waiting for tomorrow.

[Threads]

Glad you liked it! Always looking to write things that people can relate to.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Loved this piece! I detest waiting as well :)

[Threads]

Waiting is a fickle thing really. It can help you grow, to learn patience, but it can also disappoint -very much so at times.
Anyways, thanks for taking your time to comment!