"Discovery"

Inspired by Ed's piece "Some times" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/edhart7/694703/

These waves have calmed my heart,

and made me feel as pilgrim

hearing the call of God's creation.

Outside my front door

in winter's sight,

they look so blue in color

with their white capped peaks;

I am humbled by the sway

of discover...

 

These mountains make me think

that maybe we all 

could walk on water... 

 

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Mountains are majestic amd I think that is why many think of God or find him on mountain tops. There is.something to be said for these great ever standing structures.I myself have not see mountains up close but the ocean has a similar appeal for me. I am a water child. I have always loved water and now I have gotten of track. Your poem.is deeply moving and it makes me want to experience what you do gazing at these magnificent rocks

[Robin]

much magic when one makes the connection to realization ~ great writing Tommy

[Rossen]

The comfort of the great Wasatch Mountains
Wrapping you and yours within there Sandy embrace
Humbling place , where beautiful poetry springs from...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

my goodness this is beautiful and ethereal and so human all in one breath~ that last line is a soul embrace~

[Samuel Dickens]

Water, with its many moods, speaks to man's heart.