"Journey"

Another inspiration from the likes of Ed. Drawn from his piece "a-maze-ing" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/edhart7/668621/

I have been taken on the journey of life,

and although

I'm longing for so much more,

I realize what has been

is a lesson,

and being able to live is a gift

given through a magical

vast expression;

                            "Yes!" It is enough,

because I realize,

my travels have just begun...

Reviews

[Ms. Gruye]

smirk. You've really emulated Ed here, Tommy, even down to the oddly spaced verse break. You've also got his tone of introspection. Sometimes, when pieces are written in tribute to or inspired by, we can get lost in the tone and style and forget to add our own hallmarks.

here this is not the case. This is still you!! Congrats

[Poetic Beauty]

Stunning especially the last two lines. Life isn't always sunshine and rainbows but without the trials would we truly appreciate the food times and life on earth is only the beginning or at least in my belief.od God and afterlife

[Poetic Beauty]

Stupid autotext good

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

ahhh bravo!!! the thrill of realization is smile inducing~ very thoughtful and joyous write!~

[Rossen]

The key to worlds , expression
warming write

[Samuel Dickens]

The road of life leads to many destinations. Sometimes the trip is the best part, though.

[zig]

well, ive read some ed's poetry before, a talented and inspiring writer, and i think your work here does him justice. enjoyed very much.

zig

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Fabulous!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Yes, life is a journey..If one doesn't learn the lessons as one goes on, they keep going around and around the mountain...Enjoyed reading your work..Sara

[Ed Hart]

a-maze-ing

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

A journey of light ; )