"All For One, And One For All"

"All For One, And One For All"

A Poem by Tommy

Astray to the recollections;

foreseen traces of elapsed life.

Dissenting search for perfection;

following without objections.    

Play the hum of revelry fife;

all for the sound of ruin's rife.

Gift of God thrown readily away;

forgotten this the soul of being.

Give us peace is what we pray,

but bring us war is what they say.

It's survival we are freeing;

destruction raged for our wellbeing.

Precious is this gist's affection!  

Age of poise humble rejection!  

 

 

2011 © T.G. Hopkins III

© 2012 Tommy


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Sad indeed, but amizingly written, I thoroughly enjoyed this, thanks for recomending it, sorry it took me long to read it, I was off from the café for quite a while, anyways, excellent poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"It's survival we are freeing;
destruction raged for our wellbeing."

Well said. A very strong, very true piece of work. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad and true. Sometimes I wonder why its so clear to some and not to others. Fascinating write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a disturbing look at humanity.
You tell the truth with a blatant disregard
to the hurt feelings of those who do not
with to hear it.

Excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, it's hard to see how it could be more crazy...you put your pen to it very well, tom

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful in depth thought here I like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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