A man alone

annother "poem" i'm not sure about may be a bit to blunt or too depressing

If a man alone, his soul walks through the arid planes of hell,

His soul alone will fade into the arid waste and wither to dust.

But a soul divided cannot fade or fall

 this soul is not alone,

Nor never can it be.

The soul of the cherished man is shared with the light of the living

 with thoughts of fondness and love

To keep the arid Waste from consuming what divides all cherished men........

 

Thoughts of a life once lived.

Author's Note

please could some on give me some input and i will do the same