Her

Just on my mind right now. Needed to get it out there for someone to see. Please review, I'll review at least one of your works in return.

She is just herself and that is beautiful

She walks by

Not knowing that she is gorgeous

With her blonde curls flowing in the wind

She talks to me yet I know we will never be together

she doesn't like me like I do her

I wish she did even if only for a day.

When I'm around her I'm at peace

In a few days I confess my affection for her

Hopeful and fearful,

Sad because of the expected answer.

She is just herself and that is beautiful.

Reviews

[Relic]

Pretty young girls have a way of grabbing a guys attention. There's a hook that's hard to break free from and a spell overtakes us. Many guys get caught in that spell at the same time making our opportunity's for her affection all the more harder to attain. Nice job.

[Rye]

I can feel your emotions, presented well.

[愛人]

Great poem. It makes the me feel emotions that i can't quite describe. Great job! :)