Letter to a Friend

Letter to a Friend

A Story by Dragonhawk0
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Not a story but a letter, Just wanted some of you romantics to review my letter to a friend and give me some tips

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You are beautiful. I really have feelings for you. I think about you all weekend when I’m home and you are the first person I go to if I need to talk to someone who will listen to me. I love how you listen and try and help. You are funny when you try and just all around a great person. I’m pretty sure you don’t like me the same so I hope this letter doesn't make our friendship awkward but I needed to get this off my mind. You are perfect the way you are. Your scars show you've fallen but your eyes still sparkle with happiness. They show that you picked yourself up. Your smile is gorgeous, wear it more often. I think you are beautiful even in your worst moments, even those days that you apologized for how you looked because you just woke up or hadn't been through the shower yet. Just thought I would put this out there.

© 2014 Dragonhawk0


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Dragonhawk0
Please review as a letter not a poem. Thank you!

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I can not tell you whether this was great or not for this was you thinking into text. However, it contained no grammatical errors (that I have noticed) and it was not necessarily well composed, but it was from your mind so the text can be whatever you were thinking. Might I suggest making this more symbolic? Add more detail?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dragonhawk0

9 Years Ago

Thank you much. I will work on it. I had some college stuff so I haven't even had time to login here.. read more



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aww that is such a sweet letter.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I can not tell you whether this was great or not for this was you thinking into text. However, it contained no grammatical errors (that I have noticed) and it was not necessarily well composed, but it was from your mind so the text can be whatever you were thinking. Might I suggest making this more symbolic? Add more detail?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dragonhawk0

9 Years Ago

Thank you much. I will work on it. I had some college stuff so I haven't even had time to login here.. read more

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Added on November 22, 2014
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Marshall, MN



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I enjoy science fiction and fantasy genres of book and movies. I love video games and would like to get into writing for fun to push my creative limits and extend my vocabulary. more..

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