Peace, Order, and Good Government

Peace, Order, and Good Government

A Poem by Thoctar
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If any of you get the specific event and place I am referring to, you deserve a billion high-fives and a parade!

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Peace, Order and Good Government

I look around me at the hypocrisy
The injustice
The suffering
I look at the shabby clothes
The amputated limbs
The starving children
I look at the so-called “relief camps” 
Meant to lock up the young 
I watch on from afar while they burn all the clothes
Burning stacks pile towards the heavens
I watch as the Police beat him
Kick him, take him away
For trying to change this system
For trying to make this land a better place

As I look at the shuffling mass
Of the unemployed
Trying to feed their families
Trying to just stay alive
So they don’t end up as the corpses in the street
Or the screaming ones in the hospital

Oh there have been ones who wished to change the system
And there were those who just wanted a better wage
They all met the same fate
Labels of Communism, Section 98
Deportation, even attempted murder
That is what they do for 
Peace, Order, and
Good Government

The bloods flows over the coal
As we look into the poverty in the midst of plenty
Brutal Repression
Prison Camps
Great journeys along the railroads
Stopped in a great city
To be defeated there by the forces of repression
All for Peace, Order, and
Good Government

And now it has passed into the dust of history
Ended by yet more spilled blood
Blood, Blood, Blood
All in the name of Peace, Order, and
Good Government

© 2010 Thoctar


Author's Note

Thoctar
If anyone gets the specific place and time period i am referring to in this poem, or at least think they do, email me and I will tell you if you are right. And give you an email high-five! Criticism welcome as always

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I have a few ideas about the specifics of this write, but I feel it more pertinent to comment that, in part, it could describe anywhere and that as an advocate of 'anarchist' theory it leaves me with the same question that such events always leave in my mind,
'Surely 'we'- the majority impoverished, the unfortunate, the maimed and tamed, the workers and inventors, etc, etc could do better than the elitists who make up 1% of the population they cull and control?'
I will mull over the possibilities of specific events- my initial instincts were fluctuating wildly between extremes such as aushwitz and pol pot, but I then recalled your nationality and thought of less known events in your country- is this anything to do with 'October' in the 60's or 70's? (I believe a canadian band did a song about this event- the band are DOA, but can't remember the song!)
This is an excellent stand alone political poem that is just as awe-inspiring read universally at any rate. Fantastic job thoctar. Have a great christmas! All the best to you and yours, spence

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i sent Spence a message telling him the real answer, if anyone wants to try again, keep going! I will give you a hint, it is about something that happened in Canada

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have a few ideas about the specifics of this write, but I feel it more pertinent to comment that, in part, it could describe anywhere and that as an advocate of 'anarchist' theory it leaves me with the same question that such events always leave in my mind,
'Surely 'we'- the majority impoverished, the unfortunate, the maimed and tamed, the workers and inventors, etc, etc could do better than the elitists who make up 1% of the population they cull and control?'
I will mull over the possibilities of specific events- my initial instincts were fluctuating wildly between extremes such as aushwitz and pol pot, but I then recalled your nationality and thought of less known events in your country- is this anything to do with 'October' in the 60's or 70's? (I believe a canadian band did a song about this event- the band are DOA, but can't remember the song!)
This is an excellent stand alone political poem that is just as awe-inspiring read universally at any rate. Fantastic job thoctar. Have a great christmas! All the best to you and yours, spence

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thoctar
Thoctar

New Liskeard, Northern Ontario, Canada



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