They Take Everything

They Take Everything

A Poem by Thoctar
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I posted this earlier, but revised it on the advice of some friends. Enjoy!

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They Take Everything
They take everything
Everything from You
Money, Rights, Freedoms
Ripping it all away
They steal your wages,
They toy with your mind,
And you cant even know it
Its all you know
They blind you to the truth
They force you from your house
They even take your life
Taking everything from You
Not knowing it
Not seeing it
Media-control
Bodily Repression
You’ve never known anything else
The system You defend
That stole everything from You
And you don’t even know it
They take everything from You
You live in ignorance of theft
Never realizing what is being taken
Until you can do nothing
Until you are nothing like You should have been
Because they have taken everything from you.

© 2010 Thoctar


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Thoctar
As always, criticism is welcome

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This poem really speaks my language. I'm an aging political and social activist with sympathy to ideologies such as anarchism, so I really hear your heart in this one. I'll never understand how people allow themselves to be so apathetic- I mean, didn't we attend the same schools and be part of the instituations as those that mindlessly follow? Aren't we subject to the same media soundbites and assertions of value, worth and desirability? So how come some can see right through it when most don't seem to even want to know?
I'll probably never know!
Good subject matter that is well conveyed once again, nice one, spence

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This poem really speaks my language. I'm an aging political and social activist with sympathy to ideologies such as anarchism, so I really hear your heart in this one. I'll never understand how people allow themselves to be so apathetic- I mean, didn't we attend the same schools and be part of the instituations as those that mindlessly follow? Aren't we subject to the same media soundbites and assertions of value, worth and desirability? So how come some can see right through it when most don't seem to even want to know?
I'll probably never know!
Good subject matter that is well conveyed once again, nice one, spence

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thoctar
Thoctar

New Liskeard, Northern Ontario, Canada



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Interested in history, politics, ideology, really anything intelligent. Always willing to accept criticism, I can only get better. I write poems occasionally, I never saw them as good, but some friend.. more..

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