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this is a poem about cutting of my grandmothers hair before she started chemo

on the blinding white porch of my grandmothers

on a horribly hot day

The whole family watching

As my mother took the first sweep

her hair was beginning to fall

the chemicals were killing her

her long locks of bright blonde

Hitting the wood

Slipping in the crack of porch

she

laughing through it all

with sadness full eyes

The tears falling down my young round face

I can always remember her

Same as me

but there no more

I love you gram

Reviews

[Ayahna.]

this is very heart-breaking, but very well put together.