Daddy's New Gift

This poem is in AABB form. It has 100 words, as my other works do too.

My Daddy usually buys things online,

since he has found things that are just so fine.

That had me find a neat, cute purple diary.

Dad actually bought it without an inquiry!

But then I found another one, prettier,

for it was really better on the exterior.

Being my second favorite color, gray,

of course it could then make my day!

It was sadly not currently in stock,

with its beauty and amazing lock.

Daddy'd still buy "when available",

it is now that gift seen favorable!

I'm now excited for that new present,

because it seems really pleasant!

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

You are doing a great job!. I like your rhythm and rhyme. Keep up the good work--LL

[ThisVivian]

Thank you~! :D

[Sami Khalil]

Poetess indeed. Enjoyed the snapshots .

[ThisVivian]

Thank you~! :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

I really enjoy the flow of this. Carefree and whimsical. Bravo my friend

[ThisVivian]

Thank you so much~! :D

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You realoy crafted this one with a very well end rhyme. The content is superb. Well done, ThisVivian.

[ThisVivian]

I think you SP'ed "really", hm? But thank you~! :D