My Sickness

My Sickness

A Poem by ThisVivian
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As most of my other poems, this one has 100 words as well.

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Encephalitis is my sickness's name:

I've had it for about thirteen years.

Of course It has got me lose fame,

which had gotten me cry tears!

 

I naturally take so much med(s),

with the help of my sweet Mom.

They’ve surely gone to my head,

which is never actually calm!

 

Any pill I’d take is vital to me,

since I always need to take them.

They’re like my sad health’s key.

If I don’t take all, then mayhem!

 

I can easily have a panic attack,

or sometimes even a seizure.

It’s like I’d be whacked.

Gosh, I am a griever…

© 2017 ThisVivian


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I love your sweet poem even though it tells of the problems you experience with encephalitis. You approach it with courage and humor "It's like I'd be whacked."-we don't want that to happen! Love the rhythm, flow and rhyme. Take your meds and keep writing dear girl!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annette Pisano-Higley

7 Years Ago

Take good care of yourself Vivian. Sending hugs to you! :))
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ThisVivian

7 Years Ago

Aw, thanks! You're such a SWEET lady!
~ sending hugs back to you ~ :D



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I love your sweet poem even though it tells of the problems you experience with encephalitis. You approach it with courage and humor "It's like I'd be whacked."-we don't want that to happen! Love the rhythm, flow and rhyme. Take your meds and keep writing dear girl!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annette Pisano-Higley

7 Years Ago

Take good care of yourself Vivian. Sending hugs to you! :))
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ThisVivian

7 Years Ago

Aw, thanks! You're such a SWEET lady!
~ sending hugs back to you ~ :D

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ThisVivian
ThisVivian

San Jose, CA



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I am a 23 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..

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