An Enchanting Goddess

An Enchanting Goddess

A Poem by ThisVivian
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As most of my other poems, this one's ABAB (except for that last relevant line) has 100 words as well.

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A goddess has her hair so curled,

with her skin then purple and blue.

She's flying up on top of the world,

glowing, like to being a jewel!

 

In that curly hair has flowers,

which is a pretty color: lilac.

They make her have neat powers:

from those hue gone from black!

 

She's flying, oh, so preciously,

with her spirit in her neat soul.

While fluttering, she's heavenly,

in such real lovely control!

 

The royal supreme being's

really, so very enchanting.

A dignified one's thinking in dreams,

and cannot be taken for granted!

 

The immortal lady is cherished, really magical!

© 2017 ThisVivian


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I like this! Very evocative, in its word choices, and use of colors.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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ThisVivian

7 Years Ago

Thank you~! :D

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ThisVivian
ThisVivian

San Jose, CA



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I am a 23 year old author, who loves to write and edit poetry/stories. I tend to keep my poems with 100 words. (I keep my username as "ThisVivian" for other websites as well.) more..

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