I'll Thank You

I was thinking about someone as I was writing this. I can't describe my thoughts very well, just my mind-set.

My heart beats whisper I love you,

The lingering souls around me hear it into the silence,

Fading in and out of reality.

I love you.

My senses long for your body,

Begging for your comfort,

From this sick world.

I need you.

Into the darkness I surrender,

I have almost given up on light,

Rather to be terrified then fallen into depression.

You saved me,

From the coldest parts of my heart,

The twisted territories of my mind,

Broken pieces of my soul.

I thank you.

Author's Note

How does this make you feel?

Reviews

[darkessence]

This has a heavy tone to it, or so I interpreted it....heh, although the ending is rather cynical ~_^ I think it felt lighter until the end actually, with talk of saving interspersed with The twisted territories of my mind, and broken pieces of my soul it still sounds as though it ends on a somewhat iffy note. Or maybe that's just me?

Still a thoughtful write ;D

[.......]

a deep write really, feel the feelings of emptiness, well expressed emotions.

[LeaflessTree]

:)

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

It makes me feel like you have love something youve lost.
But I LOVE it :) 100/100