Insane

Written when I was felweed but more true today than when I wrote it

Insane
A Poem by felweed
 

Is this me...

Insane

Why should I try I said with a grin

feeling myself die from within

Why should I care what others feel

My life is ficticious and not very real

Some people think they know me so well

little do they know I am a spawn from hell

I can be what ever I want to be

and make them see what I want them to see

Should I continue and play my game

lying and cheating and feeling no shame

But what would it get me, what would I win

laughing silently at my little white sin

Feeling insame, knowing I'm mad

wondering if this why I'm so glad

If I keep going I know I'll be dead

killed by my own mad laughing head.

 

Reviews

[Astro Annie]

The rhyming and flow give it a hint of mad glee that fits perfectly.

[Christina]

I like it. ^^