Senstive

Senstive

A Poem by grim
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Another older one from Felweed that still makes sense today, at least to me

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Sensitive
A Poem by felweed
 

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Who ever said it ws good to be sensitive
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You can't see me hidden in my shell

cuz I am to sensitive and all is not well

I tried to come out to connect with someone

but I am to sensitive and oh so dumb

They think they know me but I showed them they're wrong

cuz I am to sensitive to stick around long

It gets me in trouble as you can see

cuz I am to senisitive because I am me

I say good bye and head back to my shell

cuz I am to sensitive and all is not well.


 

© 2009 grim


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yeah i can really relate to that,im often being told im to sensitive,but i really like the way the poem flowed and really well written thanks for shareing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love the repetition it reinforces the idea.

I am a turtle and carry my shell with me. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2009

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