Pool of dispair

Pool of dispair

A Poem by grim
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I wrote this under Felweed but lost that account info

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Pool Of Dispair

It was so dark, but I did not care

feeling the waves of deep dark dispair

Living alone in this deep dark pool

letting no one touch me to make me their fool.

I was losing my strength, losing my soul,

But this isn't living, or so I've been told.

Seeking an answer I lifted my head

hopelessly hoping that I would stay dead.

But someone stepped forward and said to me HI

shocking me speechless for a very long while.

With eyes so bright and so full of charm

never wishing to do me no harm.

She stripped away my shell and left me bare,

taking my essence, my heart and my soull, I did not care

Raising my spirits, raising me hope

not really caring if I could cope.

She took my hand and taught me to walk,

showed me her laughter and got me to talk.

She gave me her love but never her heart

So I must be careful not to lose my small part.

Because if it would happen that she no longer cared,

I would down sink swiftly to that pool of dispair

© 2009 grim


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Added on September 22, 2009

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grim
grim

Sunnvale, CA



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