Infatuation

Infatuation

She smiles

One-sidedly

Like all my life’s denial

In sync with the music

She glides toward me

Then the bass drops low

And her body starts to flow

She spins slowly

See her figure

Feel her figure

My hands on her hips

Our bodies on fire

Our sweat is gasoline

The motion of her spine

Ripples in the turpentine

Her arms on my shoulders

I’m breathing in all of her

Her desire

All her crazed lust

Her sickly sweet ego strokes

Wrapped in the heavy perfume

She bought with the heads of men past

The sound of her moaning

And breathing heavily

 

Soon all around us

Will fade, even the music

Like monotonous arbitration.

 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

This was nice like a cold beer on a hot night and a hotter body drinking near you.

[Deron Alexis]

lol you speak like I wrote your book in my poem bro how hot was she XD

[Into_The_Cosmos]

Loved it. This was beautiful and intimately captured in the sense of two figures attracted to each other have such a power between them that everything fades when they touch. This is truly beautiful.

[Deron Alexis]

never forget the consequences this guy is gonna find himself butt naked chained to a bed with his gold chain gone

[Into_The_Cosmos]

Haha yeah true. That's funny and sad haha

[Tree]

This poem has energy, powerful and well constructed the imagery was incinderary, and sensual; liked that last line, too. It was provoking and got me to thinking. Enjoyed this read.

[Deron Alexis]

thanks dude

[James E. Peterson]

sexually charged and intimate, you have captured every aspect of infatuation especially the lust. An easy 100/100
Keep it up!

[Deron Alexis]

thanks man

[Frieda P]

You got my motor to purr, nice one Deron... ;-)

[Deron Alexis]

lol mission accomplished XD

[Frieda P]

xD Lol

[Fiona Nadine]

I have conflicting feelings, but in a good way. Definitely a good poem.

[Deron Alexis]

thanks for the comment

[gombeggar]

an old story, an old song...nice wording still...afterall, mankind is te retelling of stories in different stripes, tries and colors...dig it

[Deron Alexis]

dig it XD

[N!LoC]

so sexy... yikes...

[Deron Alexis]

lol