All In My Head?

All In My Head?

 In my head in my head

Always here never dead

Never silent but ever alone

Know the voices that I call home

 

“Hahahaha

Te hehehehe

Love that attempt

but you’re still weak”

crowded by fear

here in the dark

put my head in my pillow

and hope for a calm

hope for a while

that they would have some mercy

and ask forever more

why they sound like me

“you’re of no worth”

You have no consequence

All for futility

Maybe that should be your name

And you know what that means

 

And evermore I finish the sentence

“All that is futile is destined to end

Without a cause without a friend

Pointless forever

Forever evermore

The world would be better

without such a sore”

Reviews

[MagicAl]

Great work - nicely put together!

[Blue Belle]

Great read! Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[Dalia]

Wonderful poem Deron, been a while I haven't read for you, and I always enjoy your writes, voices in our head, very common dilemma indeed ;)

[Deron Alexis]

hmm thanks dalia for reading i enjoy your work as well

[Dalia]

Thanks Deron, long time no see ^^

[The Witness]

Wonderful. Reminds me of Poe. I really enjoy this poem so much. This is a really lovely poem. Forever evermore.

[Deron Alexis]

thanx poe is actually one of my favs really glad you liked it

[AWickedMoon]

Love it! The first four lines are amazing!

[Deron Alexis]

thanx the first four were meant to give a general sense of what to do i was making it up as i went along love your profile pic by the way

[AWickedMoon]

Any time, and thank you. :P

[Into_The_Cosmos]

“Hahahaha/Te hehehehe/Love that attempt/but you’re still weak”

I love that part!!! It definetly drew me in even more once I read that. Awesomeness!

[Deron Alexis]

thanx glad you liked it

[Lonesome Traveler]

That middle verse just seems to reconstruct the endless and rambling voices that crowd and cause claustrophobia of the mind. I like your writing style and can relate to this alot at the moment.

[Deron Alexis]

thanks and I hope you get to keep some of your sanity

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Ohhhhhhh god !!! you should ignore such voices its a pure evil
every human has two creatures , one is the angle which makes yo do the right thing and the other is the devil which shouts all the times in our heads with bad deeds
and attitudes !!! ignore it and you will be in the safe side !

[Deron Alexis]

thanks for the advice the thing is for some of us the angel has been a bit absent or distant

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yeah maybe , but i think he just struggle to appear under our darkness

[Deron Alexis]

lol that's a theory

[Felecia]

Ah...those voices. They aren't very fun...and often like to remind us of those hurtful words and things, that they like to stick into our heads. May be one voice, may be more. I've come to name my voice...not sure if that's a good thing or not.
I have to say, this is sad, but the message it pretty clear. Nice write, well written, good job

[Deron Alexis]

thanks for reading and reviewing naming your voice is not bad its just different as long as you try to keep them at bay

[Felecia]

Guess so haha

[de_maruf]

good