Speak of violence

Speak Of Violence

You say it’s all my fault

Typical human filth

Say you’re always right

Say everything

While I say nothing

Stand there

And take this s**t from you

 

With every hot breath

I feel my claws growing

Every time you stutter

Making the rules as you go

Lying away from what you know

My fingers are itching

to snap your spine in two

my jaws are ready

to sink my teeth in

 

My lip recoils to release the first words

Flaming deadly

Loaded with acid

So I spit them in your face

Spew them in your ears

I don’t fear you

Like you wish I did

And now I don’t respect you

Unlike the time when I did

You’ve lost it all to pride

Stupidity and nonsense

In desperation to make me look bad

 

Is this what you wished for?

to see my final form

to remove my mask and make up

then why do you test me further

just shut the hell up and

LET!!ME!! SPEAK!!!!!

 

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

I can feel my hair getting blown back on my forehead as the words are hurled into my face

[Deron Alexis]

lol thanx i guess i was going for a sort of acidic concussion type thing blown back and burned at once thanks for reading

[Frieda P]

Whoa, who charged the pistons in your breakfast food this day? Pfft, and you talk about me!!

'Flaming deadly
Loaded with acid
So I spit them in your face'

I can see you were a little pissed off here...erm.

I can't hold a candle to you my dear friend! ;-)

I love a good poetry rant, nice one!

[Deron Alexis]

the dude just pissed me off too much that day first step is a poem next the acid really comes out I can't take much more crap from him .but you know what that's like XD

[Frieda P]

I'm sure he deserved it plenty, just saying you're no meek kitten either. ;-P

[Deron Alexis]

yes i am XD i just like to keep my claws sharp

[Frieda P]

RAWR

[Deron Alexis]

lol

[Frieda P]

:-D

[The Nameless]

Full of emotion and explains the situation well.
I think we all have felt like that before =D

[Deron Alexis]

yeah we have

[The Dreamer]

i can relate to this very well - i know how it is to feel so much anger and frustration- but writing it down helps me to flush it out of my system - and so i often do that.

[Deron Alexis]

thanks for reading thanks for understanding and thanks for the review :)

[de_maruf]

never

[Deron Alexis]

lol

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

god ! so strong , and reflex internal anger
and it contains biological terms and materials :)
well done

[Deron Alexis]

lol thanx for reading

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

no need to thank ;)

[Deron Alexis]

actually it was inspired by my physics teacher hate that dude

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

hhhhhhh tell me about it !! i hate physics !! and the people who teach this subject they are not my favorite for sure :P

[Deron Alexis]

yes they are rather cocky but this guy is not even good at teaching

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah !