The Thoughts Of The Morn

The Thoughts Of The Morn

Sitting on the balcony,

cold for the Caribbean.

winter season morning.

mist in the yard,

like rain forest blessings.

I like it like this.

I like the wet weather.

I like the thick fog and cold.

the effervescence of my mocha,

frosting up my lenses.

the dew weighing down the mist.

I like rainy days.

I like cloudy gloom.

love the darkness of night,

or a small windowed room.

I love you.

you like all of the above, 

like morn's fresh air,

like cold dew spring water,

like power turbulent storms,

like calming steamy mocha,

all in your eyes.

the one I think of holding, 

in the maelstrom's storm-brew.

the hand i want too hold, 

while walking in the mist.   

I laugh at myself .

"the crazy stuff that happens when I think!"

Then mummy dearest,

 sends me out in the cold,

to take out the trash.  

  

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

WOW!! What incredible imagery here. Your poem sent me off into the Bay area where it's cold and foggy,haha. Great write.

[Deron Alexis]

thanx dude really i appreciate your review I know this sort of mushy stuff isn't your thing

[Rob Santana]

haha,although most or rather all of my writes a dark I really do like all types of writing. Even the mushy ones (tear drop) hahaha.

[Deron Alexis]

lol like the new profile pic by the way

[Rob Santana]

oh thanks. I'm into the imagery thing I like taking crazy pics like that. Although I've been told by several writers here if I could change this one and another I had up cuz they said it creeped them out.hahaha. Not gonna happen,haha. uumm....I do call myself CREEPER. People take it to serious. Like I said all imagery I'm a cool guy ,really,haha

[Deron Alexis]

it's rather creative ...really why didn't I think of that

[Rob Santana]

I have a pic that was my profile pic for awhile similiar to yours. I'm wearing a blue bandana. I have it up on my photos if you wanna check it out.

[Deron Alexis]

yeah I saw it when you added me to the group

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

great job, it has so many pictures to imagine during reading
and i think she is a lucky lady indeed ;)

[Deron Alexis]

thanx allot glad you like it ...really XD

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes i liked it ;)

[James E. Peterson]

yeah if miss saw this she'd be proud. Great portrayal of images.

[Deron Alexis]

you really think she'd like it

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

sure no doubt ,unless she is crazy :P

[James E. Peterson]

hell yes! If she think's mine's great, your's a masterpiece!

[Deron Alexis]

well she is a bit crazy... XD

[James E. Peterson]

lewee do start nuttin eh

[Deron Alexis]

lol

[zainul]

Presents a wonderful picture of your land and ecosystem.
Enjoyed reading.

[de_maruf]

well done

[Deron Alexis]

thanx for reading