Dreamicide

self destructive dreams what was lost can never be reclaimed

Dreamicide

Like ichor music ran

nocturnes through my veins

a cause to a purpose

a reason for such darkness

A song a scene night and grace

A dream-kiss pictures of your face

Till dawn till dusk again

cold glass and silver 

frozen in my brain

But dreams are better

when left unborn

A life given dream

commits suicide

spilling shards of glass

in my blood

the liquid silver

fashions a blade

a mistake spewing heartache

and all my memory does is

twist the knife

in scars that would have healed

thus rivers from my house

flow with sorrow

blood diluted with tears

hope slaughtered by fears

only the latter comes true

hence my silenced songs

my dreams at the gallows

A night sky with no purpose

cries for you till sunrise

only that you know 

what you would have meant to me 

Reviews

[kimmy]

Oh wow this is a very deep poem..There is a lot of heartache behind these words..the emotions that pour from this poem caught my heart....This was just an amazing write...Very good job on this piece.

[Deron Alexis]

thanks it was inspired i started creating a new song after writing it

[kimmy]

I think the best writing I have is what was from inspiration :) That is amazing you created a new song from your work, that is great.

[Jagged memory]

very well written piece, deep and intriguing

[Mauricio Montoya]

Poetry is art, but always open to interpretation. I don't know what direction you're going with this piece but I like how it comes together, great flow, nice work.

[Deron Alexis]

its a heartbreak poem about a dream that was longed for but never happened and has no chance of happening in other words she said no