JUST MAYBE

A little love poem!

JUST MAYBE

 

Maybe one day I can add lyrics to the instrumental
Song that plays in my head when I am graced with
Your presence, your voice, your touch, your love…

 

Just maybe

There is a song and a poem out there that has
The same rhythm as the beat of your heart
The changing of the musical pace is heard when your smile
Appears to shine down on each of our spirits.

 

Just maybe

I want to write the love song that is played at every wedding
I want to write the love song that every couple refers to
As “their song”, “their jam” “their inspiration for love”.
I want love…I really want you
My only wish…is for us to experience bliss

 

Just maybe

In time when your soul is joined with my matching soul
The song will be complete with a lead vocalist and a full
Church Choir behind singing the words from my heart to yours.
In the future maybe you can testify to me that love is indeed real
In the future maybe it is your love that I will feel
In the future baby…

…Just maybe

Reviews

[~Shadow Kissed~]

i like the subject almost like a poem about writing a poem. Very good work.

[Jason]

Good stuff as always old boy.

"...In the future maybe you can testify to me that love is indeed real
In the future maybe it is your love that I will feel
In the future baby…


…Just maybe"

That speaks volumes to me, you seen want you want and know how you feel, but at the end of the day is it real? "Just Maybe

[Jamie S.]

I can feel it in my gut...love it! Perfect title and ending, thank you for sharing :)

[Amy Whetzell]

This is beautiful writing!

[Jaded rose]

I love this poem. Like Tina...this is a love poem of hope. Very nice.

[Tina Kline]

A wonderful long poem of hope. Just maybe it will come true. This is very beautiful and romantic.

[lawrence bear]

love makes us do funny things, we all want love somewhere some how in our lives. nice piece.
bear

[Chaos]

I am not a sing song kind of person. I speak from the poetic heart when I say i love the meaning in this poem, or should I say my perception of what this piece means. My only negative is that I don't like it when the poetic line ends in a middle of a thought or sentence. It interrupts my thoughts, feelings and visuals. Other than that? Great write!

[Valentine]

One thing all humans seem to wish for is a love that will sweep them up and carry tham away to forever bliss..Hope you find it..Valentine

[Alana Michele]

I love it. its sweet and simple, but still has all the feeling that sometimes can be so hard to get out!