JUST MAYBE

JUST MAYBE

A Poem by THE LOST ROSE
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A little love poem!

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JUST MAYBE

 

Maybe one day I can add lyrics to the instrumental
Song that plays in my head when I am graced with
Your presence, your voice, your touch, your love…

 

Just maybe

There is a song and a poem out there that has
The same rhythm as the beat of your heart
The changing of the musical pace is heard when your smile
Appears to shine down on each of our spirits.

 

Just maybe

I want to write the love song that is played at every wedding
I want to write the love song that every couple refers to
As “their song”, “their jam” “their inspiration for love”.
I want love…I really want you
My only wish…is for us to experience bliss

 

Just maybe

In time when your soul is joined with my matching soul
The song will be complete with a lead vocalist and a full
Church Choir behind singing the words from my heart to yours.
In the future maybe you can testify to me that love is indeed real
In the future maybe it is your love that I will feel
In the future baby…

…Just maybe

© 2011 THE LOST ROSE


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This is quite possibly one of my favorite pieces you've submitted. I feel behind in my reviews and stumbled on this gem!!! Quite lovely. I find myself wanting to perform this piece on a stage, surrounded by darkness and candlelight...you are brilliant!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the ideas and word images in this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is very beautiful! Great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful. A poem that is written like a love song. I bet you performed this on the spoken word stage, correct? LOVED it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've been away from writers cafe for a long time and it it great see that you are still here and writing beautiful poems.


Posted 12 Years Ago


maybe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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nice write, just maybe, lol keep up the thoughts,,,Jan

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's not Oh Sueannah but I'd take it any day. You should put this to music. The feelings are there and the passion is open for all to feel. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago



Beautifully done...flawlessly presented, your bundle of thoughts. I really like the closing lines: 'In the future baby....Just maybe.

Nice work....

Posted 13 Years Ago


i could feel reading it, the love seeping thoguh the words

Posted 13 Years Ago



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THE LOST ROSE

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