The Final Experience

The end of a relationship!

The Final Experience

 

The possibility of an imagination that one night transformed into a dream

And later became my reality, was a result of my prayer to GOD, that he, unite us once again.

I did indeed pray for you to share in the many sunrises and sunsets with me.

As I pen this poem I realize that I should have defined the word “many” with my prayer.

I should have seen the deception in your eyes and felt the emptiness of your spirit.

But I got caught up in the fact that maybe my prayers were being answered…So I waited.

 

With you as my air, the creativity from my soul spilled to an unimaginable level

That touched the hearts of a few, which witness it on print.

The only explanation for the power of words, spilling from my spirit…was…“LOVE”

With you as my air, my wind, my night…I finally tasted…“LOVE”. 

It was you that I thought would inspire my next 100 poems.

It was you that I wanted to love and make the center of my world.

Even though we only made it a fourth of the way I take solace

In knowing you didn’t even love me that much, if you even loved me at all?

 

At times, we all live in the moment of the lyrics, to our favorite songs.

That’s why music sings to our bodily movements, our sudden actions, our daily thoughts!

My poems dedicated to you were love songs from my heart.

It was my way to communicate and touch you when you were not there.

I do not hold on to the feeling of what the “Beautiful Ones” do to you every time!

The question asked of you, “Do You Want Me” was answered by your actions or lack of.

But my pen will continue to spill ink about hope and faith on blank sheets of paper.

I will never stop expressing the best part of me…you tried to destroy…My heart!

Sweet dreams forever “Beautiful One”, and I thank you finally…for ending…this experience!

Author's Note

Inspired by a Prince's son titled the "Beautiful Ones"

Reviews

[Dom]

Well done, man! I enjoyed every word of your poem. Great job. :)

[deeps]

Such a wonderful expressed write here.

[Legion]

That was nicely done. And the write goes on no matter what.

One thing (in case you aren't aware of it), when dealing with the word God and referencing Him with pronouns, those pronouns are supposed to be capitalized as well. For instance, "my prayer to GOD, that he, unite us", "he" should be capitalized as well. Some grammatical rule someone made long ago. Don't know why but perhaps out of respect or awe.

[Lexi Nicole]

Very nicely written. I like this, it seemed just like you were talking. Everything flowed perfectly and fits so well. Great work!

[Jamie S.]

I love reading the sentimental thoughts of a man, beautifly written. Thank you for sharing your experience :)

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

How beatuiful! I just love it. The way you wrote was poetic, but also conversational. How wonderful it must have been to have been in love, I havne't felt that for five years! So I almost forgot what it feels like. lol

Kena SunGoddess Dawn

[Tina Kline]

Does anything really last forever? Not love but it is an experience that can change us for the better or for worse.

[LonelySoul]

sometimes Gods greatest gifts are un-answered Prayers

[Ladysue]

A beautifully expressed piece...nicely done...

[Cassandra D.]

Very amazing... Beautifully penned.
Thanks for sharing...