The Final Experience

The end of a relationship!

The Final Experience

 

The possibility of an imagination that one night transformed into a dream

And later became my reality, was a result of my prayer to GOD, that he, unite us once again.

I did indeed pray for you to share in the many sunrises and sunsets with me.

As I pen this poem I realize that I should have defined the word “many” with my prayer.

I should have seen the deception in your eyes and felt the emptiness of your spirit.

But I got caught up in the fact that maybe my prayers were being answered…So I waited.

 

With you as my air, the creativity from my soul spilled to an unimaginable level

That touched the hearts of a few, which witness it on print.

The only explanation for the power of words, spilling from my spirit…was…“LOVE”

With you as my air, my wind, my night…I finally tasted…“LOVE”. 

It was you that I thought would inspire my next 100 poems.

It was you that I wanted to love and make the center of my world.

Even though we only made it a fourth of the way I take solace

In knowing you didn’t even love me that much, if you even loved me at all?

 

At times, we all live in the moment of the lyrics, to our favorite songs.

That’s why music sings to our bodily movements, our sudden actions, our daily thoughts!

My poems dedicated to you were love songs from my heart.

It was my way to communicate and touch you when you were not there.

I do not hold on to the feeling of what the “Beautiful Ones” do to you every time!

The question asked of you, “Do You Want Me” was answered by your actions or lack of.

But my pen will continue to spill ink about hope and faith on blank sheets of paper.

I will never stop expressing the best part of me…you tried to destroy…My heart!

Sweet dreams forever “Beautiful One”, and I thank you finally…for ending…this experience!

Author's Note

Inspired by a Prince's son titled the "Beautiful Ones"

Reviews

[Grace Lea]

Oh Lost Rose, you know I always love your writing and you've done it again! A poem that is real and raw emotion and honest. It's beauty comes from the fact that you know how to put into words what all of us have felt sometime or another. Excellent, well done!

[Rayne]

I loved this. I too have felt the same way on occasion and will not give up my passion for writing, the experiences that life takes us through, I believe, only make those of us who pen our thoughts and feelings, all the more stronger, and much better writers..
Thank you so much for sharing this!

[SM Davis]

It was my way to communicate and touch you when you were not there.

There is a sweet but raw dedication to the line above. I do not know if this is a character write or if this comes straight from your heart, but either way, I like the simplicity it brings. I really enjoy the honest "confession" to her and no one / everyone. It is a gift when a writer can take the most painful moments and turn them into simple beauty. You have done that here.

[:)]

This is so beautiful :)
I wish I had more to say but the only word coming to mind
Comely
Astonishing
Lovely
Honest
True

[.]

Wow i am overcome by your soul and the way you present this. it's sincere, very open and truthful. I enjoyed this.

[Yvette Shaw]

Very sincere, open and honest. Great Job!!!

[Rick Puetter]

Dear THE LOST ROSE,

As with all you poems, my friend, the sincerity and openness sing out in this piece. This is a product of your true feelings. You do not try to paint yourself in a favorable light, you simply state your feelings and let others judge. This makes the write quite captivating.

Nice work. Greatly enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

And EXACTLY what I'm going through at the moment. Poems always resonate with the common experiences of our lives. This cuts right to the heart of the matter. BTW I'm HUGE Prince fan! But I will say this, a beautiful body can only disguise a bereft soul for only SO long! KUDOS!

[S. Allison (Ferrante) S..]

Written from the heart and beautifully expressed. Well done.

[TL Boehm]

But my pen will continue to spill ink about hope and faith on blank sheets of paper.

I will never stop expressing the best part of me…you tried to destroy…My heart!

it is what we do....difficult for some to understand but nonetheless our identity. this was very intimate, like sneaking into your personal journal and reading your thoughts. Nicely done.