Rising

There was a blinding flash of light and then that was the last thing i remembered. I sat up and all i could see was nothing. Like a vast wasteland of snow and ice, yet not. I felt around with my hand and it was fluffy and soft. I couldnt believe whaf was happening, i was standing on a cloud! My head hurt, a ringing pain and the sound of screeching tires implanted in my brain. The last thing i could remember was pushing Gwen out of the way of the car, incredible, horrendous pain as all the bones on my body snapped, and then nothing. Bliss. I stood up and started walking to the light in the distance, it took me what seemed like hours, but up here hours meant nothing. days meant nothing, up here i was dead and i had an eternity

        The gates of heaven were beautiful, outlaid in gold and silver with markings of God and chirst and tales of the bible too old for me to remember. My jaw dropped as i saw the gate keeper an angel, in all his glory. I spoke

     "am.. am i dead?"

     "yes" he replied "but your new life is just beginning"

As he spoke his wings swayed from side to side. What i would give to have a pair just like that, and then almost as if he was reading my mind he said

     "you do"

I looked back and there they were. i Spread them happily, but Where was Gwen? She wasnt here with me? Heaven just wasnt heaven without her. I gloomily closed my wings. unable to fly without the love of my life. I walked into heaven when i got an idea and i headed straight for the throne of god. As i approached his throne i heard a choir of the most beautiful voices i've ever heard singing his praises on high. a i approached god i felt a sudden fear, but my love for gwen overpowered that fear. I walked up to god and DEMANDED to talk to her.

        "Damian my son, i cannot let you do that, she is too far gone to be saved, to try is suicidal"

         "i was'nt going to try to save her" i protested but her just replied "you are even against my will, so go! defy me!" and with a swipe of his hand i was cast down. falling, falling ever more to the earth in a meteor or tears and feathers.. i hit the ground, and blacked out.

   

Author's Note

i SUCK at writing about heaven, but now that this part is done the rest should be so much easier, thanks for reading

Reviews

[GreenQueen]

I love how you described his exit from heaven, very nice. I can't wait to see what's next! Keep writing... :)