Butterfly

This is a poem about two souls meeting and never leaving.

Ancient Stars have long told our story

A budding romance

Transform into fiery passion

No one eyes can ever captivate me

The way yours do

The way your eyes leave me in a trance

Deep in thought inside my heart

I can never let you go

Holding your fragile soul

In the palms of my hand

Like a butterfly

You could fly away

You could

You choose not to

You sit in my hand

You let me stroke your wings

You let me kiss your colors

You are a beautiful mystery

You sold yourself to me

For a kiss

I am forever yours

You are forever mine

In eternity of all times

Through life and death

I will never let you go

Reviews

[Johnson Bobby]

powerful and beautiful words I can't remember when I last heard a beautiful so capturing and
inlighting

[costa siwale]

my insatiable need for poetry drove me to devour this tantalizing piece. incredible stuff my friend, i enjoyed this thoroughly.

[Nathan the Sane]

Truely beautiful. The 'holding buterfly' metaphor is great, and really captures the beauty and fragility of love.
There may be a typo in the second verse ("No one eyes..."). It might be correct grammar-wise, but I think 'No one's' might fit better. Just illuminating that for you!
Keep up the amazing work :)

[wordman]

butterfly wings,so many beautiful colors,and they are very affectionate creatures..this is a great write

[Neal S]

Lovely writing. I really like this one!

[T.S. Sky]

Thank you! :)