Life Sucked Me In

Life sucked me in

I can't wait for it to spit me out

Paitently waiting

Taking the easy way out

Accepting my defeat

Hoping some slack will be given

I can't go on fighting

I have nothing left in me

I succumbed to my worst nightmare

A nine to five schedule

Who is this girl I've become

A girl that I transformed into

Conformed to societys monotonaus ways

The last thing I ever wanted

Stuck in the constant rotation

Scared it'll never end

Waiting for life to spit me out

Author's Note

Like always random thoughts I wrote down

Reviews

[JustWantLove]

If I didn't know any better, the tone in which you've written this play suggests you as a free bird, a fish, roaming in the need of freedom and abundance; your playhouse is the visionary world, in which you must be the artist, painting each second's breath with your brush of toned and esoteric notes; directing each move and choreographed to perfection. This, is the novelty of deeper expression; risen from the depths of the soul, quietly screaming to be free! Astounding perfection on your part!!

[shane]

i like this, similar meaning to something i wrote, its cool to see someone else's work on the same idea, ha and i prefer yours to mine =]

shane

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It is easy to get sucked in by the masses and go with the flow but yes when you do you realize that part of you is missing... I myself have never believed in the rules society puts on us, that makes me an outsider often and works for me... I much enjoyed your thought process on this piece.

[JordanAnthony]

Haha, I like your random thoughts.
It's strangely a very well written poem, I enjoyed reading it.
I think we all feel the same way when it comes to life monotonous sometimes.

[deeps]

succombed...Not really sure what that means
This is such a emotional write here.
So very well expressed.